Happy Summer. Also, how're you today?
I am doing well enough! Also, if you wish to talk, send me an IM. Trying to conduct a conversation over a posted thread isn't... ideal.
Okay. So in notes or chatroom?
I am online right now if you wish to IM me on DA.
Just wrote a really short AR story. Would love for you to read it. It’s my very first one so don’t expect too much. Thank you! 👶🍼
I read it and you should keep at it!
I'd say focus on making characters feel fleshed out and interesting. Felt felt more like a lore dump or checklist of things that you, the author, likes. That being said, AR isn't really my thing, so what do I know?
However, I think you've already cultivating a great writing talent, which is sharing your work as it develops. Sorry if this isn't what you were looking for, but it's also important "know your audience."
Best of luck!
Happy late birthday.